Thursday, July 5, 2012

FINAL VISION CHAPTER ONE by ruie Mullins

Harrison closed the door to his apartment and stepped into the hallway. The air felt muggy and sweaty, not surprising since it rained so hard all night he hoped the roads would not be too slick for the drive to the Hamptons to visit his friend Jason and his wife Betty. To his surprise as he stepped out of the apartment building the weather had changed the air was fresh and clear and there seemed to be little traffic for a Saturday morning. He went to the underground parking to get his car a small green Fiat X19 a comfortable small car for driving in New York he had got a deal and. He was anxious to try it out on the highway. He touched the key lock to open the door and removed the convertible top, donned his sunglasses perched on his head, a noise grabbed his attention and he looked around but nobody was there. So he got in the car and took out from parking on to the street. He squinted,Good thing I brought my favorite sunglasses he thought to himself as he positioned them on his nose, while looking in the rear view mirror, he smiled "not bad if I do say so" "whew the sun is pretty awesome and really bright for this early on a September morning" he pulled out into the traffic and hit the gas going straight down the street as he adjusted the sound on his CD player he thought this might be a good day after all. He liked Irish music and tapped his fingers to the wild beat on his steering wheel.He thought of Maeve and their last date to see Michael what's his face and that hit Irish dance show they saw in new York just before the accident.

1 comment:

Sorry Gnat said...

has good energy; you may have to tweak your sentence endings, but it is smooth, keeps the reader wanting more! hooray